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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 4:24 pm | |
| It was later that evening as I walked up to Stella and Eleni's apartment. After Eleni found out about me being her father things have been a little strained at first, but then we got even closer than before. I knew that Eleni wanted to celebrate her birthday, which was today, at the weekend, but I wanted to go and at least tell her my congratulations. I had my little present for her well wrapped in my poket and knocked on the door. | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:08 pm | |
| I hear a knock on the door and walk to the hallway "I'm coming" I say and open the door. "hey" I say and smile at you "i guess you're here for Eleni" | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:08 pm | |
| "Actually... yes." I replied, giving her a smile. "But maybe I'm here for both." | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:15 pm | |
| I smile and give you a hug "I'm glad you came" | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:16 pm | |
| I hug her back and smile. "Well, can't let my birthday girl down, now can I?" I said. | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:22 pm | |
| "no you can't" I smile and pull away so you can go to Eleni | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:23 pm | |
| "So she's in her room?" I arche my brow. | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:26 pm | |
| "Yes she is" I rest my hand on your shoulder "she'll be so happy you're here" | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:27 pm | |
| "I bet she thought I forgot, right?" I asked with a hint of a smirk. | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:31 pm | |
| "yes, she asked me yesterday if i knew if you were coming over today" I say with a smile | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:37 pm | |
| "Surprise, surprise." I said to Stella with a smile and then knock on Eleni's door. | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:40 pm | |
| I smile and walk into the living room to give them some quality time | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:42 pm | |
| After I knocked on the door I opened it and peered inside. "Hello birthday girl." I said with a smile. | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:47 pm | |
| "dad!" she says happily, she gets up from her bed and hugs you | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 6:57 pm | |
| I hug her back and smile. "How was your day?" I asked her. | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 7:01 pm | |
| "good" she smiles "you came!" | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 7:44 pm | |
| "How could I forget my girl?" I asked and smile. "But I have something for you." I said and pulled a nicely wrapped gift out of my pocket with a gift card from her favorite shop and a small box with a necklace in it. I give the gift to her to unpack.
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 7:49 pm | |
| She looks at Mac with a surprised face "Thank you" She says and start to unwrap the gift. Once she's done she smiles bright. "This is beautiful, Thanks dad!" She says and hugs her dad | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 7:55 pm | |
| I hug her again, smiling and glad she loved her gift. "Happy birthday, sweetheart." I said warmly. | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 7:58 pm | |
| "I'm so glad you came dad" She smiles and kisses your cheek | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 8:03 pm | |
| I smiled. "What kinda dad doesn't show on his daughter's birthday. I like to see that smile on your face." | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 8:06 pm | |
| "True, thank you so much for the gift dad" Eleni smiles happily | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 8:08 pm | |
| "You're welcome." I said and smiled back. "Wanna wear it?" I asked, mentioning her necklace. | |
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Det. Stella Bonasera Admin
Posts : 6857 Join date : 2009-12-03 Location : New Orleans
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 8:13 pm | |
| "Yes!" She says and gives you the necklace. | |
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Det. Mac Taylor
Everything is connected. Posts : 7303 Join date : 2009-12-02 Age : 69 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Birthday Surprise [Stella/Eleni] Sat May 14, 2011 8:17 pm | |
| I take the necklace and wait for her to turn around and then put it on for her. | |
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