First Fiction

OK so this is my first story so if you see any problems with it please let me know. This story is about Mac and Claire having a daughter that he thought died in 911 with his wife. (I don't have a name for my story yet so if someone come up with something please let me know)

Mac was at his office. Today was hard on him, as it was his daughter's birthday. Yes he had a daughter. She was three when the Towers fell. He still remembered that day. Flashback

Alexia Meadow Taylor was three years old, she had blond hair, Big blue eyes like her mother, and a cute little button nose. Lexi as her father called her, ran down the hall to her parents bedroom, "Daddy daddy get ups." She yell while trying to climb up on there bed. Mac rolled over and seen his daughter and smiled helping her up, "Good morning sunshine." He said as he tickled her sides a little. She giggled and smiled big, "Daddy, mommy's gots breakfast all done. She made pancakes." The little girl said with a bit grin bouncing on the bed. Mac laughed, "Okay Lexi lets go get some pancakes."

She climbed down and waited for her dad and took his hand walking down. Claire had just finished the last pancake and put it on the plate. Mac put his finger to his lips telling Alexia not to say anything as he sneaked up behind his wife and grabbed her around the waist making her screamed. "Mac Taylor I swear if you're going to be the death of me." Mac laughed as did Lexi. After breakfast and they all got ready to go. Mac got the car started as Claire got a jacket on Lexi. A little while later they for to the twin Towers where Claire worked and Lexi went to daycare, As Mac pulled up Claire kissed him goodbye and Lexi leaned up and kissed his cheek, "Loves you daddy." Mac kissed, "love you too Lexi." Mac said as he watched his ladies walk in to the Towers. End of flashback

Mac wiped his eyes as someone knock on the door he looked up seeing a young girl about fourteen with light brown hair, blue eye, and torn up clothes. He gave her a bit of a worried glance as he waved her in. "May I help you miss?" He asked as he walked around his desk, She threw herself in his arms and started crying. Mac was taken back at first, but soon wrapped his arms around her and rubbed her back. "It well be ok." He said to her. "Shhh Its going to be ok. Want to tell me what happened miss...?" She looked up at him. "Its me daddy." She said when she calmed down a bit, Mac stared at her in disbelieve. "Alexia?" He asked. He looked into her eyes and know it was her, pulling her as close as he could he started crying with her.

After they held each other and cried their eyes out, Mac pulled away a little still holding her, He wiped her eyes and looked her over. He felt his blood boil as he seen the cuts and bruises on her. "Who did this to you baby?" Alexia looked at him and shrugged. "I don't know, He never told me his name." Her eyes started tearing up again. "He made me call him Daddy." Mac pulled her close again and held her tight rubbing her back. "Its ok baby I'm here with you now. No one is going to hurt you again." He said kissing her cheek. She nodded burring her face in his neck crying. "Daddy please don't let go." She begged holding him as tight as she could. "I wouldn't baby girl I've got you." Mac closed his eyes knowing she wasn't going to like what he was about to say. "Honey we need to get you checked out by a doctor." She looked at him and nodded. "Well you stay with me?" Mac looked at her and smiled a little. "There's no way I would leave you Lexi." She smiled. "Daddy I want to go home." She said. He nodded grabbing his jacket and wrapping it around her then wrapping his arm around her. "I need to tell them I'll leaving." She looked at him. "Them?" Mac nodded. "The people I work with Honey." She nodded. Mac knocked on Stella's office door. Stella looked up and smiled waving him in. "Hey Mac. Who's this with you?" Mac looked at Alexia then Stella. "This is my daughter Stella." Stella looked at him surprised. "You have a daughter? Mac why didn't you tell me?" Mac sighed a little looking down. "I thought she died in 911." Stella looked at the girl then Mac unsure of what to say. Mac looked at Stella. "I'm taking Alexia home I'll call you later." Stella just nodded as she watched Mac led his daughter out of the door.

The car ride home either of them said a word, Mac stopped at hospital. Alex looked at him. Mac turned to her. "I can't let you shower with out getting checked out, so lets get this over with first. I'll be right there holding your hand." Mac said taking her hand. She nodded and got out. Mac got out and wrapped his arm around her walking in and getting her to a room for an exam. After she got dressed in the robe she laid down on the table and Mac sat next to the table holding her hand like he promised. The doctor examined her and looked at Mac. "She's been beaten and raped multiple times." Mac took a deep breath and nodded closing her eyes. Alex had her head turned away from them trying not to cry. Mac opened his eyes and sat on the table pulling her to him. "I'll never lets anyone hurt you again baby girl." Not long after they where home and Mac showed her where the bathroom, kitchen, her room, and his room was she nodded. After she had showered and put on one of Mac's shirts, they sting on the couch when Alexia's stomach growled. Mac smiled a little looking at her as he held her. "Hungry?" She nodded. "What would you like?" He asked. "Pizza?" she asked. Mac nodded getting up and calling it in. Not long after the pizza got there and Mac got plates and a soda for Alex and set everything down on the coffee table and sat by her. Opening the box she smiled seeing her favorite pizza she smiled at Mac "You remembered?" She asked Mac smiled and nodded. "How could I forget." They had talked a little and had Alex had fallen asleep so Mac carried her to his room and got ready for bed and laid with her holding his little girl close

I already love it

you know, I am always having trouble with naming my stories, too.... so.... how about....
Alexia's Story? OR Mac's story, depends on what's going to happen as this progresses

Alexia's Broken Heart?

Sounds good to me, too

Ok so I fixed my story and if anyone wants to read it here's the link.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6968740/1/bAlexia_bs_bbroken_b_bheart_b

I will, later